Review: Emergency Response



Emergency Response by Susan Sleeman
My rating: 1 of 5 stars

I did not really care about the main characters somehow. They didn't really seem like real people to me and I had trouble believing that they would get over their emotional baggage as quickly as they did in the end.

Some things were left unresolved in the story. For example, the hero, Noah, had a child he'd abandoned years before whose life he now wanted to be a part of. He never even got to interact with his son, let alone make progress towards his goal of being a part of his son's life. Since this book is part of a series, I suppose she may intend to resolve that issue later, but it was still unsatisfying to be left hanging.

The was one major implausibility near the end of the story.

*Spoiler alert if you care about such things.*

Throughout most of the book, the heroine, Darcie, had gang members who kept trying to murder her by strangling her, shooting at her, etc. They didn't care how she was killed; they just wanted her dead. Near the end they kidnapped her and kept her safe until she could be rescued. Supposedly this is because the boss decided he wanted to do her in personally, but there was no real reason why he would do that. He didn't know her and he just didn't want his money laundering to come to light, so it wasn't actually all that personal.

But mostly I just didn't really care enough about the characters to feel any sort of suspense about what happened to them or to be concerned about danger that threatened them or to feel pleased when things worked out for the hero and heroine to be together, so this book was meh for me.

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